Went back into this illustration after being asked for a print by my wife. I opened it up to do some quick re-sizing, and a week later I've got a very different looking piece. I'm not certain that I'm done with it yet, but I thought I'd share the results of my incessant tweaking now, before I take off (honeymoon ='s no posts for 3 weeks!).
Let me know what you think of the changes!