Ok, so part one was the first 2 pages of a 6 page comic that I did about 10 years ago. It was some good fun at the time, but looking back makes me grimace. Even the character design (or perhaps that's especially the character design) is cliche and deserves some serious reworking.
Unfortunately the terrible storytelling continues, though page 4 isn't nearly so bad as the preceding pages. I'd even go so far as to say that I kind of like the first panel... But damn am I glad I don't try to render rock like that anymore... blech!